Sending criminals to prison is not the effective method to deal with them. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 将犯罪分子送进监狱不是有效的方法解决犯罪，大家应该给他们提供同意教育和工作培训的机会，是不是认可?
有关题目：
Research suggests that majority of criminals who send to prison would commit crimes when set free, what do you think of this case? What can be done to solve this problem?持续犯罪是什么原因与解决渠道?
作家立场：针对不一样的犯罪分子，采取不一样的改造方案。
布局图：
首段：背景介绍 + 原题看法 + 作家立场
二段：让步原题看法的合理性
三段：反驳原题看法的不合理
尾段：第三亮明看法+ 总结理由
思路拓展：
1. 犯罪的形态不同，对于重刑犯或者屡教不改者，犯罪已是一种习惯，是报复他们觉得不公的社会。因此，种罪重罚，延长刑期愈加有效合理，由于这体现了法律的公正，对于受害者与家属是一种精神安慰，更关键的是，这对于潜在的犯罪分子有威慑用途。
2. 对于一些少年犯罪者，过失犯罪者，冲动犯罪者，教育是有效的，教育帮助他们深思生活，是非分明，增强守法意识，因此，刑期结束后，受过好教育者愈加容易融入社会，开启新的生活。
3. 对于一些服刑者来讲，出狱后因为有入狱的历程遭到社会和朋友的歧视，同时，找不到谋生的工作，想要开始新生活，心有余力不足，这样的情况下，工作技能培训是可取的。
语料库：
1. criminals = offenders = perpetrators 犯罪分子
2. teenage criminals = young offenders = juvenile law|breakers 少年犯
3. youth crime = teenage crime = juvenile delinquency 少年犯罪
4. domestic violence and parental neglect 家庭暴力和爸爸妈妈的疏于管理
5. sex and violence = pornography and violence 色情和暴力
6. corrupt ones pure mind 毒害纯净心灵
7. stimulate ones sadistic impulse诱发暴力冲动
8. misguide ones life attitude 误导生活观
9. released prisoners = those who are set free from the prison 刑满释放职员
10. conduct some anti|social offences 做出反社会的行为
点评：闪光点表达，推荐用
11. embark on the criminal road 走上犯罪道路
12. turn to a life of crime开始罪恶的生活
13. habitual criminals = hardened criminals 惯犯
14. felons 重刑犯
15. gangster boss or terrorist 黑帮大哥或者恐怖分子
16. recidivism 累计犯罪
17. repetitive criminalities = continuous crimes 累计犯罪
18. reform malefactors = reclaim law|breakers 改造犯罪分子
19. It is notoriously hard for released prisoners to earn a decent living, especially when they lack the basic working skills or survival abilities 对于刑满释放职员来讲，体面谋生特别艰难，尤其是当他们缺少基本工作技能及存活能力的时候。
20. As for some juvenile criminals or those who are led astray, they, in most cases, have few chances of receiving fine education and thus own poor law|abiding consciousness. 对于一些少年犯或者过失犯罪者，他们大多状况下没机会同意好教育，因此缺少守法意识。
21. endanger the stability of the society and afflict numerous sufferers 破坏社会的稳定与折磨很多的受害者
点评：写作犯罪或者惯性犯罪的影响
22. the hardship of making a living 谋生的艰难
23. take revenge on the community which they think unfair 报复他们觉得不公平的社会
24. has a deterrent role to play in 可以在方面发挥威慑用途
拓展：deter sb from doing sth = sTOP sb from doing sth 阻止某人做
25. provide sb with custom|tailored ways of reclamation 应该提供量体裁衣的改造方法。
语料库：
1. The rate of various criminalities，in some counties, keeps on increasing in recent decades, which not only afflicts the sufferers but also jeopardizes the security of the society 近年来，各种犯罪率居高不下，不只给受害者带来痛苦，也威胁到社会的稳定。
2. some people tend to believe that = an argument hold by some people is that 有人觉得
3. however，my stand is that 然而，我的立场是
4. primary = for a start = first 第一
5. also = further = another reason to be considered is that 第二
6. last = eventually = to make the final point 第三
7. in other words = more precisely = by that I mean 换言之
8. granted，I confess that = indeed, I have to concede that 的确，我承认
9. Nonetheless, it is rather superficial to simply believe that 然而，简单觉得相当肤浅
10. In the final analysis, I re|affirm my conviction that 最后，我重申我的立场
